5.29.2012 | 06:10

Redemption

Like spiky ice walls sprouting from the ground
Himalaya singing the deepest of  basses.

Might it come, might it not,
Clock is ticking, spook waiting.
And in the evening time,
There was light.

Above all frustrations, and
Countless speculations
Yonder he rises
Saying: "I'm back, bitches."



Hahaha. Wala akong maisip na comeback speech, free verse na lang. :p

15 comments:

  1. nice! I love the last line...

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    1. nyahaha. echosera ko lang. salamat sa pagdaan. :p

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  2. hahaha.. welcome back! :)

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  3. So, my little brother (through Kuya Nate), you're redeeming yourself from what/who exactly?

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    1. from my unbeing. i'm redeeming me from myself. *okay, ang gulo nya but you are a writer and i know that you know exactly what i mean. :P*

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  4. Cheers! It's always refreshing to witness someone's renaissance ☺

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  5. i love that " im back,bitches"

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  6. katuwa ung mga peguin mo haha

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  7. puwede pa ba ang blog ko sa blog list mo...

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so... what's your take on it?

Unquote Joe

Most of the time, tact is not for the intelligent. It takes a great deal of 'being there' to realize that something else is going on.
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