8.15.2011 | 10:22

Leave Me Not


Monochromatic
is living without you near
I need you right now.


Primary Color
you are my life's basic hue
fill it, take me in your arms.


Don't store the brush, yet
accept my apology
this time, I'll swear truths.



32 comments:

  1. medyo mahal na ngayon ang pintura,hehe..

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  2. @joe: aww.. :( come here, baby bro.. there there.. *hugs*

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  3. Your Magpie is magic ... in lovely haiku.

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  4. Arvin: Pre, mahal na nga. hehe. salamat sa pagdaan.. Bakit di ka na tumutula?


    Nate: Kuya.. :| alam mo naman siguro ang pinagdadaanan ko.. :|


    Helen: Thank you.. but the person I'm writing this for is more magical.

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  5. ..full of melancholy, especially in your ending note... ah, dramatic haikus!

    ~Kelvin

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  6. nice :) I'm sure he'll forgive you after he reads this :)

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  7. Wishing you the best my friend! Thanks for checking my post!

    JJRod'z

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  8. Akala ko ba ayaw mo ng haiku?:P
    You'll get through this, I believe so

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  9. Awwwwwwwwwwwww... suyuin mo ng bongga! *hugs*

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  10. Tayo ba ay nasa iisang bangka, kung ganun, fistbump. :)

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  11. Widowlad: Hello Kelvin, I appreciate how you connected with my sadness.. Thanks for dropping by!


    Zaizai: I hope he does. :/


    JJ: Thank you, my friend!


    Kiro: No, I didn't say anything like that. What I meant to say was, "I didn't feel using a haiku for this one". Thanks brad.

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  12. Nimmy: Oo nga, matinding suyuan talaga. Tampo eh..


    Jon: Yes, radically.


    Mugen: Maari, sa ilang bahagi ng tulang ito. Ngunit hindi naman kayo nagkatampuhan ni kuya JC. pero fistbump na rin..

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  13. I love the urgency of this!

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  14. I was like oh no when I read his entry last night. Goodluck GB.

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  15. Ahh, I hope whomever you apologized to accepted it. This was lovely.

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  16. Very imaginative take on the prompt-- thanks! xxxj

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  17. comment ko sa picture, ano yan? nagrerenovate ka ba ng bahay? hehe!

    lovely poem..:)

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  18. @joe: now i get what you were saying earlier.. powreynjerms... NKKLK! hehehe.. :P

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  19. :( i wish both of you well.

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  20. "hurt me with truths, never comfort me with lies"

    -wihihi!!! so love the poem!!!

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  21. There's nothing wrong with a brush with the truth! Great take!

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  22. A heartfelt desire to paint love.... very openly expressed!

    Rick

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  23. Mama Zen: Thanks for that observation!


    Bien: Salamat friend.. Ayun, medyo okay na kami..


    Kristen Haskell: Awww.. Thanks for wishing me well on this..


    Jen Revved: I appreciate your comment on my work, thank you.


    Reflections: Oh, thanks a lot. :)

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  24. Mommy Razz: Hehe, base po dun sa picture susulat ka ng kung anong maisipan mo.. Ako po mommy naisip ko na sana wag muna ako iligpit ni James sa buhay niya. hehe.


    Nate: NKKLK tlga kuya! Pero may iba naman na okay din yung sinasabi. hehe.


    Sean: Salamat... medyo ayos na kami ngayon..


    Wil: Salamat din sa pag-love sa gawa ko. hehe


    Lena: Yes, that's true. Thanks for reading and critiquing my work!


    R. Burnett Baker: Oh, what a wonderful remark, I appreciate it Rick! Thanks.

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  25. Very entertaining read. Thank you.

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  26. Doctor FTSE: Thanks for finding it entertaining. :)


    HyperCRYPTiCal: Hello Anna, thanks for taking time to read my work. :)


    Trellissimo: Thank you for that comment sir. Those metaphors were sure well-thought of, because they are dedicated to someone. :)

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  27. I love "don't store the brush".

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Unquote Joe

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